Deep mind

Head is blurred.
Mind is knotty.
Thought is tangled.

Missed words?
Never mind.
Just prompts.

Depth of thought.
Meanders in your mind.
Paths inside your head.

Better now?
Should be. May be.
Just thoughts.

Now I think better.
Now I feel sober.
Now I know.

Any other grief?
Not at all, chap.
Just plots.


By Luca Arnaldo

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2 Comments Add yours

  1. Akash Singh says:

    Wow! This poem is exceptional.
    “Any other grief?
    Not at all, chap.
    Just plots.”

    The rhetorical question adds a lot of enigma and the satirical ending is phenomenal.

    A little girl’s life changes in just few seconds and she learns a lesson that will fill your life with inspiration. To find out more read my narrative poem “Survivor” at
    Hope you will like it and get inspired 🙂 Do leave your precious comment behind.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Lucarna says:

      Thanks Akash for reading and commenting. Will read yours, for sure!

      Liked by 1 person

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